Molly Reviews: The Little Crow by Caitlin Ricci

Blurb:
Detective Jamison Landry’s job isn’t easy. He’s dealt with the worst criminals imaginable and believes in his work and the community he serves. But he’s never met someone quite like Mal before.

The mysterious man, rescued from a basement in which he was chained by cultists, keeps Jamison guessing. He both confuses and excites him, and Jamison isn’t sure how he feels about that. Plus, things turn from unusual to downright strange when people start insisting Mal isn’t quite human. And Jamison’s creepy dreams of crows and graveyards don’t make things any better for him.

Will Mal stay around long enough for Jamison to figure out his secrets, or will this stranger leave him aching for more?

Where To Buy:
NineStar Press || Smashwords || Amazon || ARe

Review:
There are things about this story I absolutely adored and things I couldn’t take. It made for this odd mix of enjoying the heck out of the story and being disappointed at the same time.
I liked Jamison. He was a strong character and I liked his conviction through most of the story. He waffled a bit in parts but he stuck to his guns when it came to wanting Mal to be nicer and live up to standards of behavior so they could pursue a relationship. I was a little surprised at his quick turn around at the end of the story though. It was fast and left me feeling a bit off kilter.
Mal was completely fascinating. My favorite parts of him were when he showed his emotions. When he allowed himself to be vulnerable with Jamison and be human-ish. Those were the times you could see why Mal stuck with Jamison and didn’t want to leave. I found it kind of hysterical who Mal considered his friend. The scenes with those two are such a trip. It brought some levity to the story and me like Mal a bit more.
The two parts that I couldn’t handle though were huge. The first is Mal’s actions in Jamison’s dream as dictated by Mal’s master. I appreciate that it wasn’t written in graphic detail but there was more than there should have been. That scene should have been more subtle than it was. I got why it happened but I really don’t think the story should have gone there. It was a bit gratuitous and unneeded. My second issue with the story was the ending. It just… stopped. there is still much for these two to discuss. They still have lots of things to figure out before they can truly give a a relationship a real try. The way Jamison acts in that final scene didn’t jive too well with his actions up until that point so it felt disingenuous. Not to mention the nitty gritty logistics. I needed more closure. I need more story since this one doesn’t feel done yet.
Stars:
Three and a half

Excerpt:
Detective Jamison Landry crept quietly through the ransacked house on Lightwood Terrace. The smell of incense was thick in the air, and he had to consciously hold his breath to keep from choking on the sweet stench. Behind him he heard the other members of his team coughing as they struggled with it as well. They’d been sitting on the house for weeks and finally had the search warrant to go in and seize what Jamison was sure would be a large cache of illegal drugs hidden somewhere in the nineteen fifties ranch-style house.

The dirty linoleum creaked under his boots as he and the team moved into the kitchen. Surveillance had told him the upper portion of the house was hardly ever used and that the people taking up residence in what had at one time been a nice home spent much of their time in the basement. He hated basements, hated that feeling of being exposed and bottlenecked as he went down the stairs to invade people in their holes. But when no one had come to the door after he’d banged, yelling that they had a search warrant and would be coming in, he had gotten a sick feeling that their search would lead to this.

His gaze caught on an occult symbol in front of the closed basement door, nothing that he was familiar with, but the dark rust-colored stain was something he was more than acquainted with, and not by choice. “Make sure to get a sample of this blood,” he whispered to the gathered team around him, pointing down. The blood was old, the stain clear on the floor even after he’d scuffed it with his boot. Around him the team seemed anxious, some even bouncing on the balls of their feet as he slowly pulled the door open.

He shouted that he was entering the basement a second before he and his team rushed down the stairs, guns up and ready to fire at anyone who happened to get in their way. What he met in the brightly lit cement room though was far different than anything he had expected as the acrid smell of sulfur assaulted his nose and tightened his throat. He’d raided meth labs, crack houses, and people growing pot in their bathtubs, and he’d never once expected to find the large circle of people dressed in bright-red robes, sitting cross-legged on the floor as they held hands and chanted in low voices. In front of them was a row of white candles, all lit, and in front of that line of dancing flames stood large object covered in black cloth.

Jamison couldn’t tell what it was, wasn’t even sure he wanted to know as he stood dumbfounded with the rest of his team, his gaze fixed on the circle of people who seemed to be in a trance.

Then one of them looked up, his eyes slowly focusing on the small group of intruders with their guns drawn on them. The man shouted and broke apart as he tried to make a run for it. His actions spurred Jamison out of his own startled daze, and he tackled the man rushing at him. With practiced movements that he could do in his sleep, the man was quickly put on his back, his hands cuffed behind him, and then sat up against the concrete wall. Jamison wasn’t as gentle as he could have been, but the safety of his team mattered more to him than the robed man’s comfort. As awareness dawned on the group, they began breaking apart. Some ran; some stood still, too in shock to do much else. Within minutes they were all handcuffed and placed against the wall, joining the idiot who had tried to rush past him to get to the only exit.

Jamison gave each of them a critical once-over. There were men, women, and some teenagers, all different ages and races. None of them seemed to have anything in common except for that they each had the same occult symbol marked in what appeared to be candle wax on their foreheads.

He wanted to ask them about the location of the drugs, but he doubted anyone would be honest about it. In his experience no one ever was, but he believed in giving people first chances to hang themselves with their own words. So few people ever asked for lawyers, even after hearing that their words could be used against them. He had just begun to ask his first question when a noise came from behind him.

He turned to the source of the soft shuffling sound, leaving his team facing the robed people. The black blanketed object was moving. He approached it cautiously. Nothing good ever seemed to be hidden under sheets, and his mind even drifted to some of his favorite horror movies as he stepped closer. The toe of his boot knocked over one of the candles, and he gingerly picked it up even as the murmuring began behind him. He was careful as he walked. Part of him knew there was nothing to be afraid of under the sheet. The other part of him, the one loudly screaming in his mind about ghosts and zombies, said nothing was ever so certain.

“No! Don’t touch him!” one of the men said, drawing Jamison’s attention.

Him?” Jamison snarled as he turned to face the suddenly quiet man. Could the red-faced, obviously angry person sitting across the room from him be serious? Did they really have a man under the sheet? And if so, why wasn’t he getting up?

“You mustn’t go closer! He’s dangerous!” a woman screeched.

Jamison had to cough against the thick smell, so much like rotten eggs, that it had to be sulfur.

About Caitlin:
Caitlin was fortunate growing up to be surrounded by family and teachers that encouraged her love of reading. She has always been a voracious reader, and that love of the written word easily morphed into a passion for writing. She comes from a military family, and the men and women of the armed forces are close to her heart. She also enjoys gardening and horseback riding in the Colorado Rockies where she calls home with her wonderful husband and their two dogs. Her belief that there is no one true path to happily ever after runs deeply through all of her stories.

Author Contact:
Email: authorcaitlinricci@gmail.com
Website: www.caitlinricci.com
Twitter: https://twitter.com/CaitlinRicci
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/caitlin.ricci.7

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